Birdwatchers started as a writing experiment. I had the explicit intent to write an autistic first-person protagonist, a mentally taxing exercise of putting myself in the shoes of someone who saw, understood and interacted with the world differently to how I did.
In my former field of work, we referred to this as creating “with empathy”. The idea being that what you’re creating is not about you flexing your skills and showing off how well you can translate your ideas to the canvas. It’s about the subject of your creation experiencing the environment you create for them.
As a designer, my subject was the user of the system or website I was designing. As a writer, my subject is my fictional character.
To respectfully write an autistic protagonist, it would be wholly inappropriate to project my simplified ideas based on external observations and “facts” about autistic people. In fact, it’s pretty rude to do this in real life too. Real people are complex, often judged too quickly before enough data is known about their perceptions, feelings and motivations. Each individual, autistic or otherwise, has a rich complex inner world and subjective experience of life.
So I tried to imagine more deeply what those commonly cited external observations might suggest about what’s going on inside. Rigidity, staring, bluntness, and whatever else gets associated with people on the spectrum surely have a lot more beneath the surface that what the tropes imply. Adults are so rarely a case of “point A to point B” because so much in our lives will have shaped the way we think and feel.
What if a person doesn’t cling to routine just because they’re fussy? What if they’re fussy as a form of self-preservation in a hostile and unpredictable environment? (In the world of schema therapy, this can be known as a “coping mode”.) What if bluntness isn’t a sign of low empathy and low awareness, but the laconic tip of a hyper-aware over-thinking iceberg?
It was hard, trying to imagine all this. Working against one’s own habit of lazy thinking is an exhausting endeavour. What I didn’t imagine was how close my imaginings would be.
Years after the story came out, I received an autism diagnosis of my own. To that end, Birdwatchers may well have been an indirect form of self-exploration, in that writing Robin’s character allowed me to understand and contextualise some of my own lived experience as an undiagnosed spectrum kid.
I was lucky. Not every autistic person is afforded the space and opportunity to think about this before someone slaps a label on them. Many have been conditioned to hate themselves because of certain stereotypes and misunderstandings, compounded over many years. And the lack of autism awareness in mainstream conversation means they’re more likely to encounter harmful judgements before any helpful context.
I don’t intentionally write autistic fiction, but my diagnosing clinician pointed out that the characters I write are all probably autistic because they came from my brain. In recent years, I learned the term for unlabelled autistic characters is “autistic coded”, which resonates nicely with me. You just are what you are, regardless of what people call you.
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Birdwatchers by JL Peridot
She looks at me and sits up. Her body is exposed now, breasts heaving as her breath comes back to her. She keeps her eyes on me while she re-does her hair and rests the sunglasses on her head. She smiles.
“Why didn’t you take a picture?” she asks. “That’s what you came here for, wasn’t it?”
“N … no,” I say. I hold up the camera, fighting the weight of the lens. “I came to watch the birds.”
She sits back and crosses her legs in front of her. She points her toes towards me, then at the sky, then back to me. She licks her lips.
“So …” Her smile deepens. “Watch the birds then.”
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2 comments:
Fascinating post, JL. I can imagine how hard it would be to write from the perspective you chose for Birdwatchers. But I love the idea of creating 'with empathy'. Talk about deep POV. Good for you. :)
What a wonderful post, JL!
It's incredibly difficult to write from the perspective of characters who are really different from one's self. When we first begin our author's journey, we tend to project ourselves into all our fiction. Only as we mature can we start to create the sort of distance (and as you say, empathy) needed to branch out and portray the enormous diversity in human nature.
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