Writing
Fluff
Author
Sharita Lira
Today
I wanted to speak about writing fluff. What’s fluff? Well, coming from the word
fluffy it means soft and comfortable right? So when writing something
considered fluff in my opinion it means the same. What’s wrong with this? In my
world nothing at all.
I’ve
read plenty of authors who’ve written some fluffy stories that have little
tension and they’ve been some of the most enjoyable books I’ve ever read. To
me, it matters what the characters say. What do they want and when do they want
to get together? At times when I sit down to write out the character outlines
and a list of details in chronological order, I already know how quickly my two
people will get together for their happy ever after. Sometimes it happens
within 30k, other times a lot longer.
In
the book I’m editing now, I Like Em
Pretty, the characters don’t have sex until around 50k. Its’ filled with
tension, a murder, and some suspense along the way. This is one of the few
books I’ve written where this occurs but in my mind this isn’t an issue.
Whatever an author feels comfortable writing they should do it. To me, being
multifaceted is the key. Do I want to write only fluff? No but I won’t be
opposed to it. I allow my characters to guide me when I sit down to write. Whatever
Nathan and Bryant or even Kajika and Frankie say should be done is usually the
way I go. This works for me and I hope the readers appreciate it too. If not, I
totally understand. The great thing about fiction is there’s plenty to choose
from.
As
a reader I look at a wide variety of stories. Sure more tension and angst makes
the getting together part if there is one a lot hotter but at times, I want to
sit down with “Roger” (my kindle) and read a romance that takes me away from
the world. Perhaps it’s a fantasy paranormal or even just a contemporary
romance where the characters are together within 20k. Am I mad when this
happens? No. I’ve read plenty of romances, some of the het, where I felt the
characters story was complete in 100 pages or less. It’s all in the mindset and
in my opinion, the same applies to writing.
So
in conclusion, do I love the fluff? Yes. Do I love the angsty and tension
filled? Still yes. In my opinion, everyone should be able to write and read
what they like. If fluff isn’t your thing, then you have the right to move on.
If you don’t like a lot of tension, you can skip it. Me, I like it both ways!
*smiles*
My fluffy romance Candyman is available
now from NNP. Book 5 of the Something
New on the Menu Series.43
Blurb: Alain Roux is the new President of the
world famous Diamond Candies chocolate
factory on the South Side of Chicago. His father, Demi Roux lost his battle
with cancer and has left it in his care despite Demi’s brother’s advice to
leave it to him. Alain has no interest in the company but to fulfill his
father’s last wish, he takes on the day to day of it anyway.Ty Washington is a
born and raised Southsider who’s working there to put him through college.
Recently, his father threw him out because he confessed he might be gay. When
he and Alain talk, his heart soars and as badly as he tries to fight it, the
two connect and eventually they decide to give their relationship a try.
In BL’s own
humorous way, she’ll tell the tale of a man and his subordinate as they
overcome the struggles to build a long lasting commitment.
Alain tossed and turned until the alarm went off at
five-fifty, signaling time for a shower. “Shit!” He pulled the pillow over his
head, not even bothering to shut the annoying thing off. “Oh God, who signed me
up for this again?” Alain finally reached over and hit the top of it, making
the noise stop. Still yawning, he removed the blindfold and rubbed his eyes.
“Still fuckin’ dark outside. No one should hafta wake up when there’s no sun
out!” Would he ever adjust to these early mornings? Who knew, but he’d have to
do it soon.
Slowly, he slid his feet from under the cover,
attempting to put them into the slippers that sat at the side of the bed.
“Coffee, I need coffee!” Tossing the eye covering, he raked his locks with his
hand. “Damn, hair a bit long much?”
The moment he did manage to get his toes into those
warm shoes, the door opened and Lucas came strolling in with a big mug and a
tray of what looked to be food.
Alain smiled and raised an eyebrow. “Now this might
be a good reason to wake up early.” Damn,
stop flirting! He knew it was wrong to be making suggestive comments to his
deceased father’s lover, but he couldn’t help himself. The man was just too
delicious to ignore.
Lucas rolled his eyes. “Cut that out! Sit up and eat
this small breakfast that Marisol made for you and get ready to go. I told the
staff we’d be there between seven and seven thirty.” Lucas made a production of
checking his Rolex.
Still not wanting to move, Alain ate a piece of
toast and sighed. “Ack! I hate getting up at this hour!”
“Well, too bad. You need to be at your best Alain,
if you wanna beat your uncle.” Lucas sat on the end of the bed and stared at
him some more, then he grinned. “God, you look more like Demi every day!”
Alain nodded. His smug grin replaced the grimace. He
took a sip of the coffee, then slid closer to Lucas and peered into his grey
eyes. “Do you wanna find out how much I’m just like Dad?” Alain couldn’t help
but flirt with Lucas. The attorney was hot, hands down one of the hottest men
he’d ever come in contact with. Plus, he knew it riled Lucas up.
“Hey, no; you stop that! I told you, never in a
million years! Now eat your breakfast!”
Alain glanced at the ceiling and went back to
eating. “Sorry Lucas, you’re just so handsome, ya know? I’ve gotta get me a man
and quick! I’ve been way too lonely!”
Lucas cocked an eyebrow and drew up his lips.
“Obviously!” He got up from the bed and looked at his timepiece once more.
“Just hurry up and meet me downstairs. Don’t make me come back up here after
you, ya hear?”
“Yes sir!” Alain saluted. He allowed his eyes to
follow the hot counselor as he left his bedroom. “Dayum, baby. Dad? Why’d our
lawyer have to be so hot? You cursed me!”
After eating
his breakfast, Alain got dressed and finally Lucas got him out the door and on
the way to the Diamond Candies building. As soon as he arrived many of the
employees stood, as if they were in the military, saluting and greeting him as
he walked the floors.
“Morning!” When he went to the management floor; a
crowd of workers stood along the narrow halls, stepping outside their offices
to say hi to their new boss. Alain nodded and spoke to each one, tightly
gripping his cup of coffee.
Behind him was Lucas, doing the same while holding a
stack of files – one for each of the employees. Alain had asked for them so
he’d know all by name and a little about each of the top workers.
He sipped from his tall mocha latte and removed his
glasses from the bridge of his nose. Now
I’m awake. He used to only wake up this early when Demi wanted to take him
out golfing or if they were on holiday, otherwise he never even opened his eyes
before ten. Alain would have to get used to these early starts.
Once they’d made their way to the large office at
the end of the hall, Lucas opened the door and Alain stepped in. “Wow! A lot’s
changed a lot since I was last here.”
“Demi didn’t tell you he redecorated? After he found
out about his uh, illness, he had it totally rehabbed to something he thought
you might like more. He wanted to make sure you’d be totally comfortable.”
Dear
old Dad!
That last statement brought a small tear in his eye
as he glanced at the large space that was now his working area. The picture
windows gave a great view of the outside. White walls, mostly bare; one modern
abstract painting hug above the mantel of the fireplace. On the other side, a
file cabinet with a stereo system on top, and in the middle, the long desk made
from fine wood with rounded corners on which sat only a vase full of white
roses and a pen set with a nameplate that read Alain Roux, President.
“Ah Lucas, are those from you?”
He blushed, “Yes, I thought you’d like them on your
first day. It’ll motivate you to see the title even though it isn’t official.
Go on – go sit at the desk and try it on for size.”
Alain returned the smile and did as Lucas suggested.
Taking a seat in the leather chair, he breathed a sigh of relief when his
buttocks sank into the cushion. “Oh… this chair is fabulous.”
“Gives good massages too,” Lucas added and pulled up
another chair from the corner of the room.
Alain cocked an eyebrow. “Does it give hand jobs? I
might need that after a frustrating day at the office.”
“Alain, will you stop?” He laughed. “Is that all you
think about?”
“Yep. You know that old song by Korn, A.D.I.D.A.S?
Shit, that’s what makes the world go ’round, Lucas.”
“Not the business world Alain. Here it’s all about
the cash and the power.”
“You couldn’t be more right my dear Lucas!”
Alain’s smile turned immediately upside down. That wretched voice! Jakob had come to
pay him a visit on his first day.

1 comment:
Great post, Sharita. An awesome story is an awesome story period. You're either entertained or you're not. I've read so-called 'fluffy' stories that I've adored and ones I haven't. I've read so-called 'serious' stories that moved me greatly, while others like that bored me to tears. It all depends on what floats your boat. There is no right or wrong. :)
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