Monday, June 25, 2012

Log Lines

With the RWA National conference staring us in the face, I volunteered to act as an editor/agent so chapter members could practice their pitches. Having been the pitcher so many times I’ve lost count, I’m always glad to help others overcome their nervousness. I know I still get butterflies when I lose my mind and pitch to an editor I don’t know. And I’ve yet to brave the mysterious world of agents. I’d likely faint or—like I did when I acted in my very first play—lose my voice on my only line.

Anyway, one thing I stressed to the pitchers was a tight log line (no more than twenty-five words—shorter even better).


  • It tells the pitchee you know your story. In my mind a polished log line equals a polished story. Not that my stories don’t need editing—just saying a good log line may gain you a reading you might not get if you ramble.

  • No good log line goes to waste. You can use it in your query letters and on your website and promotion materials. There’s even a blog site dedicated to these polished kernels that, hopefully, will intrigue readers to take a look at your book and buy it.

So while you’re writing, manuscript or query letter or promo stuff, keep working toward that perfected log line. You’ll be glad you made the effort.

Here’s mine for the book with the hot cover:

Sometimes a woman has to take a flying leap of faith—even if it’s into the arms of a man hell-bent on her destruction.

Oops. Guess I need to get this jewel posted.

Dee Brice
Erotic Fantasies Where Nothing is Forbidden


Tina Donahue said...

Great log line, Dee. They're murder to write though. Same as synopses. I'd rather struggle through an entire manuscript. :)

Fiona McGier said...

People who are immersed in language have the most difficulty in brevity. I got my degree in English and I can't ever seem to say in a few words what I can clearly express in a few pages. That's why we are writers, I guess!

jean hart stewart said...

I'm with Tina, hate, hate, hate synopsis....

Adele Dubois said...

You are so right about those loglines, Dee. I need to work on a few for my WIPs, as we speak.

Gorgeous cover! Wow! Best of luck with your release!


Dee Brice said...

Thanks for your comments. I'm with all of you re synopses, but I find I'm getting better with log lines. In fact, they've become the "inspiration" for my stories. Not all the time, but more and more often.

I love the cover! Thanks and I'll pass that on to Syneca.