The Bard tells us that a rose by
any other name would smell as sweet. Ellin Dodge insists You Are Your First
Name while Theresa Meyers (How to
Use Backstory Effectively) urges us to find
character layers in their first, middle and last names.
Using Theresa’s suggestions for
layering for my latest WIP, I used numerology on my major characters and a few
minor ones as well. I think I’ve succeeded in adding depth, but then another
problem raised its hand and head-slapped me—hard.
Too many Ss.
I had a Storm and a Sebastian and
a Shea. Then I added a shape-shifter whose name also started with S. Trust me,
even though he’s a very, very minor character, his name had to stay as is.
Editors sometimes tell us that
readers find similar names confusing, so I knew I had to do something before I
submit the manuscript. Having done the numerology for layering of traits, I
figured changing two of my S names to another name—Sebastian to Rolf, and Shea
to Victoria—shouldn’t hurt the story or the characters and would also eliminate
reader confusion.
That one’s a fingers-crossed
hope.
And then up jumped another devil.
If I use my heroine’s real first name (she’s mostly Storm) then my hero and
heroine are Rolf Lauren.
So, would a rose by any other
name still smell as sweet? I’ll leave it up to you.
BTW, just finished edits on my
upcoming release from Ellora’s Cave. Hope to have a date for It Takes a
Thief by next month.
Dee Brice
Erotic Fantasies Where Nothing is Forbidden
3 comments:
Geez, names are hell to pick sometime. I think you gotta change Eolf or Lauren though. Some wiseacre is sure to have too much fun with that...Jean
Yeah, Jean, I know. But I don't want to change it again unless I absolutely have to. I'm sure my editor--if and when I have one--will have some ideas as to what to do. lol
Dee
Yup, that's what editors are for!
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